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Post by solitude on Nov 12, 2007 9:08:01 GMT -5
The tree
The enchanting tree dazzling Charming the elegant street Shimmering summer foliage Beautiful motions convene
The girl observed on the balcony The ladies walk on by Entranced and enchanted shifting Perfected beautiful tree
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Post by bcoyotey on Nov 16, 2007 21:08:11 GMT -5
solitude, I love the colorful language as well as the creative style and imagery. Great Drops piece. Lady B
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Post by - Moirae - on Nov 29, 2007 19:29:07 GMT -5
this poem put me in a peaceful state of mind that I rarely get to visit, so thank you for putting me there with this little gem
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Post by olivialuka131313 on Dec 8, 2007 6:14:35 GMT -5
Beautiful! i love the peaceful feeling this left me with, it reminded me of the tree outside of a house I lived in when I was very young, it was always my favourite tree!
Olivia
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