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Post by weathered on Dec 23, 2007 7:16:42 GMT -5
speeding cars
red lights watch strangers slaughter anne my decision cut her ghost good-bye thought time would blind i know that it asked summer charming graves by crime but i have not fallen for your hands you never raged then
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Post by - Moirae - on Dec 24, 2007 15:53:08 GMT -5
This was quite a charming DOP poem; well use of the words given. Good work, thanks for sharing.
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Post by bcoyotey on Jan 7, 2008 16:28:32 GMT -5
Ouch! Great impact in this Drops, weathered. The first three lines made me catch my breath. Lady B
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Post by Mystiq on Jan 27, 2008 16:35:48 GMT -5
Hi weathered ... good job, for my first read of your work. Welcome! These lines held me: "but i have not fallen for your hands you never raged then" - Mystiq x
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