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Post by solitude on Dec 26, 2007 13:14:01 GMT -5
Winter Morning
Pine woods are captive in shining snow Visiting ghosts of shimmering trees Shifting ribbons of white stream by Observing in envy the charm
Green holly watches the noble stars Silver strangers singing good-bye Red slick lights arriving in time For a breakfast of berries in field
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Post by bravestonethethird on Dec 27, 2007 0:20:05 GMT -5
Gorgeous! Thanks for sharing this "charm."
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Post by - Moirae - on Jan 3, 2008 15:32:39 GMT -5
Please teach me how you write like this? Is there no genre you can't master? Even with DOP you transform the words into a powerful and beautiful image. Very well done.
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Post by Mila~ on Jan 4, 2008 5:22:00 GMT -5
amazing!1 i read every and each of the word, trying to capture it ~ ^^
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