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Captive
Dec 30, 2007 8:55:56 GMT -5
Post by jademoon on Dec 30, 2007 8:55:56 GMT -5
Your captive, I sit graceless A ghost shimmering white in a field of graves Unfettered by time, my hands cupped for gift I thought you would be noble Ever blind to the woods in his garden My rage like summer slaughtering the snow A star shinning lights red gold and silver I have fallen
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Captive
Jan 3, 2008 11:33:36 GMT -5
Post by solitude on Jan 3, 2008 11:33:36 GMT -5
Really beautiful images in this, great use of the words to create the scene.
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Captive
Jan 7, 2008 16:30:08 GMT -5
Post by bcoyotey on Jan 7, 2008 16:30:08 GMT -5
Jade, You brought emotion and images to life in this Drops piece. Beautiful writing! Lady B
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Captive
Jan 27, 2008 16:40:01 GMT -5
Post by Mystiq on Jan 27, 2008 16:40:01 GMT -5
Hi Jade ... I espec like first three lines. They set the mood til you smoothly spun it up-side down. Great job - Mystiq x
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