bupaje
Wandering Muse
A great journeys begin with a search for truth.
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Post by bupaje on Mar 13, 2008 14:23:26 GMT -5
Silver ribbon streaming captive of snow blind woods
Shimmering rage sprays the trees slick, shining markings
Summer arrives, unfettered beast cuts ghost white fields
then singing charms rich brown and noble green.
Pine and holly giggle good-bye to ice's envy.
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Post by bcoyotey on Mar 15, 2008 19:01:29 GMT -5
Very nice Drops bupaje. You paint a lovely picture.
Pine and holly giggle good-bye to ice's envy.
Wonderful last stanza! LB
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aoeclald
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My orb > Your orb
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Post by aoeclald on Mar 15, 2008 19:06:37 GMT -5
The transition of winter to spring and summer here is captivating! It must have taken you quite a while to write this on the Drops. Excellent job! As LB pointed out, the last stanza is one of my favorites, as well. Great write, thanks for sharing Welcome to TPS! I hope you enjoy your stay here!
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bupaje
Wandering Muse
A great journeys begin with a search for truth.
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Post by bupaje on Mar 16, 2008 11:05:43 GMT -5
Thank you. I am really enjoying this forum. Lots of friendly folks.
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Post by violist on Mar 17, 2008 16:18:28 GMT -5
The words in here are very well put. Such amazing descriptions! It must have taken you some time.
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