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Post by salsaqueen85 on Apr 19, 2008 13:44:27 GMT -5
lotus beauty flirtation splashes from your fingers
You wink shedding my goblet of desire
I'm a moody captive to your love falling down a white curl of confusion
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Post by violist on Apr 19, 2008 19:47:14 GMT -5
Very nice; a captivating (every pun intended) story of captivation (told you so) in love. Excellent wording, considering the limitations.
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Post by bcoyotey on Apr 20, 2008 16:59:29 GMT -5
Bravo salsaqueen! Wonderful descriptive and emotive Drops. You make it look easy. Lady B
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Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on May 27, 2008 19:05:23 GMT -5
this was a simple and beautiful piece, you painted a picture with few words that was vivid and very nice. much enjoyed.
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Post by tsu on May 28, 2008 16:12:06 GMT -5
a beautiful choice of words conveying your images easily to the imagination..
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