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Post by ruebenobijn on May 27, 2008 9:39:10 GMT -5
Be I not a leaf falling When blinded by a flower Be it not the scent of beauty When smelling the blooming Spring
Be I not a delicate lamb When giving you my thoughts Be it not the gift of writing the white mist over green grass
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Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on May 27, 2008 19:41:52 GMT -5
hey, welcome to TPS this was a very sweet little drop, much enjoyed. lovely imagery.
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Post by ¤ Maeka Amanite ¤ (WD) on May 28, 2008 21:30:08 GMT -5
Welcome to TPS, it's great to have you! Also this turned out really well. The words flowed nicely and overall an enjoyable piece. Well done.
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Post by bcoyotey on May 30, 2008 17:01:24 GMT -5
rueben, I found this short Drops poem to be quite beautiful.
Welcome to TPS. I look forward to seeing more of your writing. Lady B
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Post by tsu on May 31, 2008 10:24:02 GMT -5
lovely words..be i not a leaf falling when blinded by a flower..very beautiful..
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