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Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on Jun 12, 2008 22:13:19 GMT -5
Pretty music for my love, You whisper my name We splash ocean waves Then twilight, quiet stars, A yellow diamond ring The truth you wish of I...
"Yes I will be queen with you my prince"
And wedding bells burst in the refrain Echoing above mountains We dance in the dark Under the stars
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Post by (k) shades of silence on Jun 13, 2008 8:57:59 GMT -5
Heeeey..... nicely done here J. I love it when words come together like that... especially when they come from a small selection. Awesome Drops!
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Post by tsu on Jun 13, 2008 10:47:40 GMT -5
..oh lovely words..the last two lines are so beautiful..a romantic masterpiece well done!!..
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Post by bcoyotey on Jun 21, 2008 20:41:04 GMT -5
Jah Jah, This is so beautiful. A haunting refrain full of unicorn belief and fairie magic. I love your writing sweetie. Lady B
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Post by iab on Jul 12, 2008 16:48:09 GMT -5
Plucked some heartstrings here, sweetie.
Beautiful.
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