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Post by iab on Jul 12, 2008 17:39:34 GMT -5
When you kiss me like that, my muscles thicken my breath shallows like a bull in Pamplona alleys.
When you lick me like that, I dissolve into a Jello brand dessert.
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Post by Sir Daniel on Jul 12, 2008 18:59:08 GMT -5
cool, passionate and even with limited words, you manage to create a whirlpool of emotions.
I enjoyed this, I'm off to read the others.
~ Daniel
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Post by iab on Jul 13, 2008 0:51:47 GMT -5
Thanks, Danny.
How have you been?
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Post by tsu on Jul 13, 2008 4:45:31 GMT -5
what can i say? - exceptional drop! as sir daniel said..a whirlpool to suck your reader in!
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Post by bcoyotey on Jul 13, 2008 15:28:44 GMT -5
My dear Adam, You sure caught on quickly. Exceptionally creative. Lady B
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Post by allmirth on Aug 11, 2008 18:09:22 GMT -5
The is predictably wonderful. I really like this little gem. Thanks for sharing. Mirth
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Post by matw63 on Aug 13, 2008 8:57:31 GMT -5
IAB - this is an awesome drop. bravo dude!
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Post by wendydarling on Aug 14, 2008 5:53:50 GMT -5
I am so glad I stumbled across this one...I haven't been in the Drops in ages. And I never thought you'd be into this, but I'm pleasantly surprised!! This was deliciously sensual; one would never know that you were limited here with your words. Awesome job!
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Post by solitaryxsiren on Aug 14, 2008 15:56:11 GMT -5
Cute, I love the Jello reference!
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Post by Created2Write on Aug 16, 2008 15:35:51 GMT -5
that first verse was more than enough on it's own, the second just wraps this in a neat little package, sir bravestone, once more you've created a masterpiece! peace, C2W
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Post by cari on Oct 10, 2008 3:54:10 GMT -5
I’ve never tasted Jello, but I’d like to try. As for the bulls, I’ll leave them to the Matadors. Nice one Iab
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Post by iab on Jun 12, 2010 16:07:59 GMT -5
Thanks everyone. Sorry for the late response. (I'm reviewing my archives).
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Post by cjr1217 on Jun 15, 2010 7:38:35 GMT -5
This is definetly one of my favorites! Really like it.
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Post by unsinkmolly on Jun 26, 2010 12:56:36 GMT -5
Rich, sexy and fun. m
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