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Post by Sir Daniel on Jul 14, 2008 21:15:58 GMT -5
The Glass Fighter
I was a traveler, drawn by the blissful courtship of Elizabeth
I began as a friend, a Protestant bystander, intending to toast a relationship that won't conceive, when a century of my lifework was unjustly corrupted overnight by the brother of my mid-wife, a sheepish librarian.
I was dragged into the garden, I remain impatient as the outcome of his charges begin to be enforced in my mind. My body weakening to the occasion, ordinary nights remain in doubt, as a clock stops.
I remain with my religion, A glass fighter beginning his dramatic end. (c)'o8
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Post by bcoyotey on Jul 14, 2008 22:32:42 GMT -5
Exalt! Exalt! Exalt!
Daniel, This is incredible! Unbelievable wording, imagery, message, and content!
Alas, you have thrown down the Drops gauntlet. *goes back to the drawing board*
I'll be seeing you on this board again, my friend. HeHe. Lady B
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Post by janet on Jul 15, 2008 6:48:20 GMT -5
Wow and WOW! Okay, buddy, now you've done it! LOL Not that I could ever even compare with this one, but I'm gonna try to see what I can do! Exalt, my friend!!!!!!
Janiel
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Post by tsu on Jul 15, 2008 13:47:50 GMT -5
utterly amazing..i'm speechless! great drop(although its much more than a drop!!)
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Post by kellygreen on Jul 20, 2008 8:31:15 GMT -5
How on earth...?
Yet I am not surprised.
kelly
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Post by matw63 on Jul 21, 2008 1:10:25 GMT -5
this is fan-super-diddly-tastic.
awesome drop dir daniel
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