ryguy
Wandering Muse
Posts: 76
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Post by ryguy on Jul 24, 2008 22:39:11 GMT -5
My clock creates a safekeeping for me to hide within Inhuman feelings blissfully catch my freedom only leaving a watermark to remeber it Im sorry to bother you all with this question But as a bystandered to my own life I must know When will my pain stop and happiness begin?
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Post by solitude on Jul 25, 2008 4:21:22 GMT -5
Lovely piece of work portraying the lost feeling, I loved the last 2 lines in particular.
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Post by tsu on Jul 25, 2008 16:54:45 GMT -5
you have managed to make such a wonderful questioning drop..truly impressive! and i agree..the last two lines are inspired!
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Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on Jul 30, 2008 19:05:51 GMT -5
The image of yourself as a bystander to your own life was really unique and cool. Good questioning tone. Much enjoyed.
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ryguy
Wandering Muse
Posts: 76
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Post by ryguy on Aug 1, 2008 17:30:00 GMT -5
thank you all for commenting and reading my Poem Drop.
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Post by matw63 on Aug 3, 2008 7:54:55 GMT -5
i enjoyed this drop....we can at all times question when our misfortunes will end and goodfortunes will begin.
i am sure good things are close by!!
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