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Post by unsinkmolly on Dec 20, 2008 1:32:45 GMT -5
Melancholy prophet spreads chilly dissatisfaction. Vexation continually dooms narration. Nevertheless, clouds in wind dress rainbows metamorphosis-fuzzy, risking exhilerated tenderness to bounce sideways indefinitely.
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Post by matw63 on Dec 20, 2008 13:15:07 GMT -5
fantastic rhythm in this drop! *nodding head* this is awesome. welcome to the tps and keep posting Mat
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Post by unsinkmolly on Dec 20, 2008 15:12:08 GMT -5
Thanks, Mat.... such a cool website. Delighted to find it!
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Post by bcoyotey on Jan 7, 2009 13:39:50 GMT -5
Molly, I agree with Matt. The flow is amazing. Lady B (Please remember to comment to 3 other poems for every 1 that you post)
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Post by unsinkmolly on Jan 7, 2009 20:21:04 GMT -5
Lady B, I did not realize that was the rule for all of the sites within. Sooooo sorry. I need to read more of the instructions. I dove right in. I thought that was only on the critique one. Haiku, and Drops and Critique poems and maybe humor are my hangouts. I do comment when I have time but am so grateful for the validation, challenge and good reading and fellowship here I will be much better and do the 3 which I think is a brilliant system, I promise! I have been searching for a site like this. In fact it is even better than I'd hoped. molly
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