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Post by wiki on Apr 16, 2009 22:54:37 GMT -5
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Obscure writer Underground newspaper Each faithful quest Crawls Begs Dies
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What a fun game ;D
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Post by Created2Write on Apr 19, 2009 14:27:06 GMT -5
And you play it well. This was brief but spoke volumes. Very well done.
~Peace, C2W
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Post by bobswife4ever (surgery soon) on Apr 20, 2009 15:41:37 GMT -5
I really loved how you started out so in depth, then went to simplistic one word descriptives at the end. You really nailed censorship to a "T" in this one. Bravo!
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Post by strangefeeling on May 6, 2009 12:25:08 GMT -5
Welcome to TPS! You entered the game with an applause from me! Short , but with a strong message within nice metaphors! Keep writing!
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Post by unsinkmolly on May 12, 2009 2:49:12 GMT -5
Wiki... crisp and cryptic. enjoyed! molly
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Angel
Wandering Muse
John 3:16
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Post by Angel on Jun 29, 2009 12:23:28 GMT -5
It was very deep, i like that... :-)
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Post by untitled on Jun 29, 2009 19:08:21 GMT -5
That was so brief yet so potent. Loved it.
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Post by Donta' Mason= Mazbaby(in&out) on Nov 18, 2009 13:49:08 GMT -5
nice and short, but still impactive thats not easy to accomplish, but you have done just that in this drop of poetry
pleasant read for me thank you for sharing
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Post by unsinkmolly on Feb 13, 2010 21:24:55 GMT -5
Great punch of a point!
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