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Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on Jul 29, 2009 5:46:49 GMT -5
He sings, Musician made whole Strategy dodges blackmail Heaven skips, promising dayime Dawn heralds a spiritual call Vulnerable chord Swamps logic and ideology Each migrates as He sings (based on the character Arithon from Janny Wurts' series The Wars of Light and Shadow, Book 5 - Stormed Fortress. Work is original dop )
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Post by bobswife4ever (surgery soon) on Aug 1, 2009 12:02:28 GMT -5
I loved it, Jah Jah, hun. I am amazed that you could take the drops list, and then creative a wonderful poem about a character in a book. That is amazing to me. I for sure owe you an exalt for this one, so I'm going to bookmark this one so that I can exalt you as soon as my button comes back. Exalt is now officially given [/i] Hugs, Love, and Happy Posting~~~ Stacy
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Post by ~NevermoreIcon~ on Aug 3, 2009 11:43:30 GMT -5
I really liked it as well... drops is a unique style and almost difficult.. this was a great read my friend.. and provokes much deep thought.. well done..
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Post by Lady Whight - member of STUPID on Aug 23, 2009 18:38:30 GMT -5
Unfortunately, I don't know the series, so maybe some of the allusion escaped my notice.. The poem carries the feeling of a bardic performance, especially in the way it comes full circle, the line 'he sings' an imitation of a chorus. Especially liked the phrase 'Heaven skips'
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