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Post by ♥Cassi-in&out-♥ on Nov 11, 2009 1:28:51 GMT -5
Only underneath the terror she comfortable. Below my brutal struggle he can't fall. In their natural hate overlooking it. When outside verdict succeeds without, A dark void force to enlighten fears.
Darling licensed me after sleep. Throughout hopes longest union. Wretched pasts around schedule. Then were insensitive rants.
How travels calm voice coasts. It traded sticks calculator. Is an lonely crystal analyst.
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Post by astroannie on Nov 11, 2009 22:50:58 GMT -5
honestly, I'm impressed. I just did a haiku and it took me a long time of dragging, dropping and pondering.
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Post by lokismischief on Nov 11, 2009 23:52:40 GMT -5
Very nice. The chosen words here and the places they are given works out very well. This has a clean flow. Really enjoyed this. Thanks for sharing
Peace and good fortunes, Jonathan
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Post by bcoyotey on Nov 14, 2009 17:47:06 GMT -5
This is marvelous Cassie. I love the metaphoric use you employed. The Drops are quite a challenge, but you met and exceeded that challenge. *hugs* Lady B
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