Memory
Established Muse
Time and Space, Mortality and Meaning, My Pen transcends
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Post by Memory on Nov 13, 2009 13:46:32 GMT -5
Underneath
Crystal snowflakes falling Diamond ice tendrils Precious tree ornaments A family dinner feast
Underneath
Crystal snow flakes falling Diamond ice tendrils The lonely voice hopes Throughout dark, terrifying sleep
Underneath
Crystal snow flakes falling Diamond ice tendrils The comfortable, surplus guests Naturally schedule a Biblical theme
Underneath
Crystal snowflakes falling Diamond ice tendrils She perfectly succeeds When her struggling darling can't eat
Underneath
Crystal snowflakes falling Diamond ice tendrils Fearful, back-boneless ministers rant The supernaturally powered, the enlightened crowns
Underneath
Crystal snow flakes falling Diamond ice tendrils Outside then long past factories He brutally sticks the verdict to her skirt without arrest
Underneath Crystal snow flakes falling Diamond ice tendrils
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twihardangel
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Post by twihardangel on Nov 13, 2009 15:28:47 GMT -5
Still awesome.
Like i said, looks like the way I write with the repeating lines. Thats really the only way I can write poetry. lol
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Post by couleurdemiel on Nov 13, 2009 17:09:26 GMT -5
I love the 4th one!
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Memory
Established Muse
Time and Space, Mortality and Meaning, My Pen transcends
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Post by Memory on Nov 13, 2009 17:44:59 GMT -5
Thank you very much.
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