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Post by unsinkmolly on Feb 13, 2010 21:28:51 GMT -5
Brutal rants clog past. My guest feasts on surplus hate. Hope's warehoused for now.
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Post by bobswife4ever (surgery soon) on Feb 21, 2010 16:30:42 GMT -5
The title, combined with the ending line...fantabulous!!! Loved it!
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Post by clearbluespark on Feb 22, 2010 11:07:33 GMT -5
Unsinkmolly,
I agree with Bobswife....the title was very fitting for this piece. Nice use of the drops! Interesting poem created with few words...always impressive.
Thanks!
G.
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Post by bcoyotey on Feb 23, 2010 0:36:06 GMT -5
Wow Molly. Honey, I am hit by the bitter reflection and let down. Such few words, in a Drops no less. Yet the feel is amazing. Applause! Lady B
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Post by unsinkmolly on Feb 27, 2010 20:05:51 GMT -5
b'swife, Lady B, clear -- thank you!!! You are all so wonderfully validating. sorry it took me so long to catch up with your comments. what exhilaration with a fresh to me batch of new Drops words. I forgot how much fun this corner of the site is! Nice to be back. Been hanging with the haiku folks, and adapting the words here to haiku is an extra special stretch!
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Post by cjr1217 on Jun 1, 2010 18:49:14 GMT -5
This is fantastic! It really makes you feel it.
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Dilasha
Wandering Muse
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Post by Dilasha on Jun 19, 2010 18:22:03 GMT -5
Those three lines speak a lot!!! Nice work!!!
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Post by unsinkmolly on Jun 26, 2010 13:00:22 GMT -5
Thanks cjr and Dilasha! appreciate. m
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