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Post by lonemuse on Jul 8, 2010 10:04:09 GMT -5
My first try at creating a Drop, it's quite difficult especially if you're looking for a word you know would fit perfect but have to work around it with what you have.
Eccentric Vessels
A faithful doubt whistles beneath Frequent signals warrant transformation My audience listens in uniform memory How Brick excepts the playground
Stamp eccentric vessels down Circle hypothetical rolls then steer me wandering She rages near admirable dealers Hope speaks desirable when void is widest
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Post by Donta' Mason= Mazbaby(in&out) on Jul 18, 2010 12:09:52 GMT -5
ha you have worked around your desired word quite well, if you ask me this is truly artful, how you painted with limited words, a humbled master piece
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Post by pinkdictator on Jul 28, 2010 16:05:07 GMT -5
This is good. It's hard to form a piece with limited words, but you did well.
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Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on Jul 30, 2010 22:19:29 GMT -5
Drops can be tricky but you've done well with this, I loved the last line in particular and the whole piece had good flow and feel
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