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Post by rayofsun on Aug 14, 2010 23:35:10 GMT -5
muscle memory speaks doubt, photographic memory emerges. choose me, my alien darling; wander in my air, rage beneath my vessel. center a memory near hope to renew a warrant sworn.
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Post by shinyhare on Aug 16, 2010 2:43:51 GMT -5
Beautiful and haunting. This poem gave me a very airy, vaporous feel, without being melodramatic or overplayed. Really nice; poems like this definitely motivate me to become a better writer.
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Post by dragonfilth on Aug 18, 2010 22:50:47 GMT -5
ooh i like it add more
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Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on Aug 31, 2010 22:43:29 GMT -5
"center a memory near hope"
that line was my favourite a stunning and brilliant drops.
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