meshica7
Established Muse
How sings the Muse? Only to confuse.
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Post by meshica7 on Sept 25, 2010 18:05:46 GMT -5
Beneath the Void
Beneath the void How is it She emerges when Hope explodes
A hypothetical heresy It rages In my memory
An outstanding transformation Is wandering
Beneath the void
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Post by rayofsun on Sept 26, 2010 11:34:23 GMT -5
I love this. I love the minimalist style and the line breaks really give this poem body and depth...excellent read, much enjoyed.
rae
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Post by Lady Wildalice on Sept 27, 2010 12:33:25 GMT -5
Very nicely done. I, also, enjoyed the structure........the flow in it's minimal form, left no doubt as to it's meaning and impact. Thank you
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Post by Gurl23 on Sept 28, 2010 11:16:56 GMT -5
Love it! Great job on the format & choice of words!
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teboy
New Member
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Post by teboy on Sept 30, 2010 16:35:25 GMT -5
Am inspired!
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