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Post by Gurl23 on Jan 31, 2011 23:09:25 GMT -5
Shadow Crashes
A shadow [glow=red,2,300]CRASHES[/glow]
- she  B          E          N          E          A          T          H              him,
    every   line   C               I                           O         S     N                             M   O            G                               P
[glow=blue,2,300]WELCOMING[/glow] cries,
        I     O    D     R     Y     D     S     R     E     L       magic . . .
and JUICY reactions!
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Post by ^^AshVan^^ on Jan 31, 2011 23:22:41 GMT -5
Cool beans! Seriously! I didn’t expect it the jumpy lines, more of a pleasure that way. I tried stuff like this before ... but they always get to long and messy -- then I dump the idea. So I know from personal experience it isn’t all that easy.
Kudos to you.
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Post by Gurl23 on Jan 31, 2011 23:37:18 GMT -5
Thanks...yeah, not so easy. This is the first time I've formatted a poem like this. I had to use the "& nbsp" (without the space) like 50+ times to make that happen. LOL
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Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on Feb 2, 2011 22:13:15 GMT -5
The overall effect is both unique and impressive. It really added to the mystique of the piece. very much enjoyed.
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