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Post by theDSW on Feb 26, 2011 0:15:27 GMT -5
An author underneath is a culprit then oppresses. Disorder shadows invalid reasons, sighs it composes It illustrates the tiring lengthy spectrum portrayed, when each plotted acts rearranges every world's orbit
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Post by Shiloh on Feb 26, 2011 12:00:24 GMT -5
great piece
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Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on Mar 1, 2011 19:51:02 GMT -5
A very dense and intense drops, I really enjoyed it. Great work
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Post by knotapoet on Mar 2, 2011 21:40:16 GMT -5
Nicely done
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Post by 1c2c3c4c5c on Mar 11, 2011 2:28:58 GMT -5
The first line stands out to me most, the choice to use culprit really seems strong in the context
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Post by Musie (Breathing deeply) on Mar 13, 2011 16:05:53 GMT -5
Well written piece of drop..and one I could identify with...good imagery....musie
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