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Post by threepartjoke on May 29, 2011 18:46:24 GMT -5
Responsibility
relevance under ribbons, birds beneath grass: chirp-wrinkle-chirp--
another abstract anchor weighs across youth's dramatic playground
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Post by - Moirae - on Jun 8, 2011 8:26:43 GMT -5
Very well thought out poem! The second stanza was perfect. I very much enjoyed reading this piece. Great work!
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Post by ladylilith ~stalwart~ on Jun 16, 2011 12:23:11 GMT -5
Such an intriguing little piece! Cleverly thought of, I like what you've done with your Drops. Real nice work. It was a pleasure to read.
Lily^^
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Post by inflames on Jun 22, 2011 19:50:55 GMT -5
Oh wow. Such a visual- great drop!
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Post by threepartjoke on Jun 26, 2011 20:57:30 GMT -5
dang! Forgot all about this little guy.
Thanks!
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Fabian
Established Muse
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Post by Fabian on Aug 11, 2011 15:45:48 GMT -5
This was very well done.
FDH
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