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Post by plain Liz on Sept 4, 2004 14:16:09 GMT -5
I breathe in for now your so quiet I fell apart over you smiles became lines I can laugh when that moment haunted my soul silky sunlight made each sound blossom no more tears ghosts exhaled dreams inhaled
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Post by ¤ Maeka Amanite ¤ (WD) on Sept 4, 2004 14:24:27 GMT -5
Very nice! I like this one.
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Post by smilingthrulife on Sept 4, 2004 16:38:05 GMT -5
Wow...this is good. I tried this out and it was quite challenging to come up with a poem with a set of words.
You did a good job
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Post by plain Liz on Sept 4, 2004 21:48:46 GMT -5
thank you both. yeah I surprised that it had a through line to it. crazy. ;D
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Post by ThousandFaces on Sept 7, 2004 18:36:17 GMT -5
EXCELLENT!
Whoa, really liked this one! I think I'm going to have to read more of your work!
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Post by plain Liz on Sept 9, 2004 20:11:05 GMT -5
um thanks but they are probably buried. as others don't seem to agree very much. ;D
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