christina
Established Muse
the sign said stop but we went on wholehearted it ended bad but i love what we started(fiona apple)
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Post by christina on Sept 30, 2004 2:44:04 GMT -5
buried beneath earth so hollow i am a grave of desire ghosts in white danced naked and free and i haunted cry tears of passion
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Post by waterlily07 on Sept 30, 2004 21:57:12 GMT -5
Nice write along with the imagery.
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Post by (Amaranthine) on Oct 3, 2004 18:34:03 GMT -5
I like it, the first two lines are cool
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fatepawn
Wandering Muse
I live in shadows but fear no light. My burden?s heavy, but my heart is light.
Posts: 43
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Post by fatepawn on Oct 4, 2004 17:37:57 GMT -5
Great job, i really like the last two lines.
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Post by ॐ Hemz ॐ on Jan 18, 2005 12:19:09 GMT -5
Awesome. The imagery was fantastic.
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