Jengle
Wandering Muse
Greetings,fellow writers!
Posts: 20
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Death
Oct 9, 2004 15:41:50 GMT -5
Post by Jengle on Oct 9, 2004 15:41:50 GMT -5
Beneath A Frigid Rose
Snow danced silently to the earth The ashes in your grave lie cold You were my passion felt within I now cry tears that sting the soul
Janice engle copyright2004
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Death
Oct 10, 2004 21:35:07 GMT -5
Post by waterlily07 on Oct 10, 2004 21:35:07 GMT -5
Wow simply beautiful and sad at the same time. Nice write.
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Jengle
Wandering Muse
Greetings,fellow writers!
Posts: 20
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Death
Oct 10, 2004 23:39:47 GMT -5
Post by Jengle on Oct 10, 2004 23:39:47 GMT -5
Thank you kindly!
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Deleted
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Death
Oct 19, 2004 1:05:54 GMT -5
Post by Deleted on Oct 19, 2004 1:05:54 GMT -5
Nice work Jeng, like the fact you rhymed it. A cute lil verse.
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Jengle
Wandering Muse
Greetings,fellow writers!
Posts: 20
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Death
Oct 19, 2004 2:02:06 GMT -5
Post by Jengle on Oct 19, 2004 2:02:06 GMT -5
Thanks again!
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beve
New Member
till death do us part
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Death
Oct 23, 2004 0:42:33 GMT -5
Post by beve on Oct 23, 2004 0:42:33 GMT -5
nice poem..but the word 'laid' sounds a bit out of place.. sounds like it should be 'lie' but whatever. nice poem.
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Death
Nov 11, 2004 4:47:07 GMT -5
Post by leathe on Nov 11, 2004 4:47:07 GMT -5
that was absolouly georgous. Beautifully bittersweet.
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