Enotneicna
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words are my medicine, read and live and love and heal.
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Post by Enotneicna on Oct 28, 2004 22:51:59 GMT -5
tears secret soul inhaled over dreams scars anguish cry exhaled beneath desire fears haunted sting buried in ashes ghosts plead in the grave deaths embrace awful frigid and hollow search to posess our naked passion
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Post by waterlily07 on Oct 31, 2004 10:55:24 GMT -5
Nice work...loved the images here.
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Post by (Amaranthine) on Nov 14, 2004 1:12:41 GMT -5
Nice poem, I like it. Only thing I'd suggest is puncuation-like: "deaths embrace : awful frigid and hollow" or something like that. It helps with the meaning and flow.
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Post by Deleted on Nov 15, 2004 21:40:50 GMT -5
Nice work Eno, like the last line and the one about the graves
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