TheTasteOfBlue
Established Muse
duct tape and saran wrap butterflywings
Posts: 106
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shell
Nov 11, 2004 15:24:42 GMT -5
Post by TheTasteOfBlue on Nov 11, 2004 15:24:42 GMT -5
leave me alone and there's where i'll be in my own shattered shell the remnants of me.
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shell
Nov 14, 2004 1:07:17 GMT -5
Post by (Amaranthine) on Nov 14, 2004 1:07:17 GMT -5
Nice write. The only thing I noticed was "remanence or"- Remanence is not a word, I assumed you meant "remnants" and so I read the last line as: - which makes more sense.
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TheTasteOfBlue
Established Muse
duct tape and saran wrap butterflywings
Posts: 106
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shell
Nov 15, 2004 17:55:40 GMT -5
Post by TheTasteOfBlue on Nov 15, 2004 17:55:40 GMT -5
oops sorry ya thats what i meant thanks.
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shell
Nov 15, 2004 20:17:07 GMT -5
Post by Jessie on Nov 15, 2004 20:17:07 GMT -5
Very nice. It's short but meaningful, and I can mostly relate to it.
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