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Post by kiltedpoet on Nov 26, 2004 15:49:33 GMT -5
Each begged cuddle became very delicious smiles Silky vanilla blossom moved naked dreams, saw His diamond glory shone in the sunlight A cauldron of rhyming passion to poetry
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Post by (Amaranthine) on Dec 12, 2004 18:10:02 GMT -5
Short, but good. "saw His diamond glory" made me laugh, I don't know what you are talking about exactly but with passion in the title I couldn't help thinking of...well you know.
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Post by kiltedpoet on Dec 13, 2004 11:29:22 GMT -5
well.................... if it made you smile, my work is done.
thanks for your comments.
Kilt
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Post by Deleted on Jan 10, 2005 16:04:13 GMT -5
Love the last two lines of this, nice one kilted.
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Post by Sketchy (love is a w----) on Jan 14, 2005 23:54:16 GMT -5
I liked it. ^^ It seemed happy.. but at the same time not. But happy at the same time it wasn't. xD I had a point to this. Really, I did.
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