leta swan
Established Muse
pain is inspiration, you'll never break me.
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Post by leta swan on Feb 3, 2005 18:29:46 GMT -5
the white *****diamond star **recoiled from the rhyming cauldron ****************that echoed ******* the suns rays till ****the moon snatched them away.
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Post by Rose of the Forgotten on Feb 22, 2005 22:48:49 GMT -5
I like the use of the stars, it reminds me of shooting stars as the poem progresses. Nice write.
-- Jus
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Post by (Amaranthine) on Mar 6, 2005 4:36:07 GMT -5
Short and sweet, I like it
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Post by Deleted on Mar 7, 2005 11:54:11 GMT -5
Darn moon Nice one leta
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