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Post by Immaculate on Mar 9, 2005 20:01:13 GMT -5
Crippling sound of silence Left me hanging in the air Breathlessly waiting For a resounding rebuff
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NPS
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Post by NPS on Mar 16, 2005 21:57:36 GMT -5
I dig this because it gives the impression of loudness or great heaviness which is contrasted by the actual language used. I think its very effective.
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Post by Immaculate on Mar 21, 2005 7:11:17 GMT -5
Thank you for the comment ;D Well, if you want to read some of my works, you can take a peek on subjects The Heart, The Darkness and Weekly Challenge (Naani). Maybe you can give me pointers too... I really would like to hear a lot from people here. ;D
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Post by nester66 ~poetaster~ on Mar 23, 2005 20:22:24 GMT -5
I agree, the sound and silence gives a unique feel. Good work.
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Post by dreamer.of.hope on Mar 27, 2005 8:44:48 GMT -5
This is exactly what I was going to say. Good work! I will definitally go and check out some of your work. I also like to find out what people think.
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