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Post by firefly501 on May 2, 2005 23:17:55 GMT -5
I may have cheated slightly and added a word or two and changed the tense of some of the words.
A Fatal Potion
He quieted his anquish buried his passion hid his truth squelched his fears and cooled the hot sting of his own tears with his cup of emptiness till he became a haunted hollow soul who felt nothing
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Post by Breathe *alive* on May 5, 2005 11:10:05 GMT -5
That's okay, we all do it occasionally! Good work. ~Brandi
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Post by Rose of the Forgotten on May 24, 2005 23:37:37 GMT -5
firefly501, Good job. And don't worry about altering a few words, it's well worth it.
-- Jus
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Post by Deleted on Jun 13, 2005 11:35:27 GMT -5
Very well done firefly, especially like how this came to a close
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