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Post by ElijahsGreyPanthers on Mar 4, 2007 16:27:21 GMT -5
My world began to melt As a candle flame will I remember listening to the ocean burn And I let the ashes linger. I cry at the stars' grave As the moon was pouring Over my wings And I mesmerized our sun
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Post by lifeart on Mar 4, 2007 22:37:08 GMT -5
What beautiful imagery.
And I let the ashes linger. I cry at the stars' grave As the moon was pouring Over my wings
I love these lines! Eloquent write!
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Post by mywar on Mar 5, 2007 14:16:35 GMT -5
I love the imagery of this warm piece.
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Post by ElijahsGreyPanthers on Mar 5, 2007 21:21:44 GMT -5
Thanks so much ^^
I actually had a lot of trouble near the end trying to find the right words I needed, but I improvised XD
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