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Post by ElijahsGreyPanthers on Jan 3, 2007 0:47:05 GMT -5
Pouring rain in a meloncholy night Began to melt into the brown dirt As day broke in a white flame sun
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Post by merryl on Jan 3, 2007 10:31:35 GMT -5
So vivid and breath-taking. It's amazing how you pulled this from a pile of words...good job.
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Post by anneteacher on Jan 8, 2007 17:31:40 GMT -5
Great imagery! A very nice write. Kudos, anne
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Post by waterlily07 on Jan 10, 2007 18:08:05 GMT -5
And so a new day begins. Love the images, Elijah. waterlily07
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Post by lifeart on Feb 15, 2007 19:00:49 GMT -5
Beautiful, I'm lovin it!
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Post by mywar on Feb 20, 2007 3:12:25 GMT -5
great stuff.
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Post by cynthiana on Dec 27, 2007 21:19:26 GMT -5
Very well written. You describe the sunset very well. I enjoy watching the sun going up.
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Post by tsu on May 28, 2008 16:34:25 GMT -5
stunning image from so few lines..wow..
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