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Post by incubuspoeticdude on Mar 10, 2007 15:26:35 GMT -5
The stranger of believing in love
Smile around the telephone and stories of passion
My old fashioned innocence is perfect cancer
She is melancholy and sweet
My angel, she has wings
Warm with her beautiful smile
I'll make it for a while
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Post by mywar on Mar 11, 2007 4:06:45 GMT -5
wow. powerful. well done. every line is a winner.
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Post by bcoyotey on Mar 12, 2007 18:29:25 GMT -5
Dude, This is beautifully done. bc
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Post by waterlily07 on Mar 15, 2007 21:51:45 GMT -5
And so another story begins... I loved reading this piece, incubus.
waterlily07
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