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Post by violist on Mar 17, 2008 16:28:27 GMT -5
aspirations: delicate petals shimmer; lotus mist
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Post by bcoyotey on Mar 17, 2008 21:21:09 GMT -5
How utterly beautiful. With six words you created a mystical world. Absolutely incredible! I am still reeling.
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Post by ¤ Maeka Amanite ¤ (WD) on Mar 25, 2008 22:45:52 GMT -5
Very creative, I like the way you organized your words here!
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Post by MidnightInEden on Mar 26, 2008 5:04:14 GMT -5
I like this... it's interesting how the punctuation really worked to 'explain' the phrasing. A very ethereal image overall, nicely done Violist.
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Post by (k) shades of silence on May 22, 2008 1:11:55 GMT -5
That's talent. You took a tiny choice of words, then added strict rules, and created a world. Absifreekinlutely posidangtively outstandingly awesome.
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