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Post by iab on Jul 12, 2008 16:03:00 GMT -5
When I hold your hand oak trees swell beneath my feet.
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Post by Sir Daniel on Jul 12, 2008 19:05:47 GMT -5
The power of love. It can move mountains and change the routes of rivers.
Those are the feelings we all should enjoy at least once in our lives. You have said only a few words, but you said them well.
~ Daniel
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Post by iab on Jul 13, 2008 0:52:49 GMT -5
Thank you sir.
This was inspired from reading many, many ancient Japanese poems.
Appreciate the response!
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Post by tsu on Jul 13, 2008 4:26:09 GMT -5
with so few words you evoke the feeling so clearly!great drop!
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Post by matw63 on Jul 13, 2008 12:14:54 GMT -5
IAB - love this
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Post by bcoyotey on Jul 13, 2008 15:23:11 GMT -5
Adam, It's good to see you in the Drops board. This evokes such tender emotion. It has a Haiku feel. Lovely. Lady B
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Post by iab on Jul 14, 2008 13:48:25 GMT -5
Thanks Matty.
My Lady: Feels good to be on this board. I may play here more often! I always feel funny, when writing a 'ku without the oceanographic romance. But I do it anyway. Actually, my last one started here, until after I saw that it could be converted. Then I moved it.
Thanks for your ongoing support of my writing, Sweet Lady.
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