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Post by ElijahsGreyPanthers on Jul 14, 2008 19:17:36 GMT -5
I remain to conduct the clock. My lifespan dragged about by a pacer, like any ordinary bystander, enforced as my lifework began. For I have their guide, and I won't doubt my concieved stop. My intended outcome drawn in my mind, cased flatly in glass.
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Post by bcoyotey on Jul 14, 2008 22:27:15 GMT -5
Elijah, I haven't seen you in a while. Welcome back honya! And what a great come back it is! Tremendous flow. A very hard thing for a Drops poem. Kudos! Lady B
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Post by tsu on Jul 15, 2008 13:49:16 GMT -5
loved the way this read..deep and intense!
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Post by Sir Daniel on Jul 20, 2008 21:03:41 GMT -5
yours was the drop poem I read before I wrote mine, just to give me an idea if something could be done with these words. Thank you for the inspiration.
I loved the intro. into this, the first two lines seem soo true 5 days a week..
great job, take care.
~ Daniel
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Post by matw63 on Jul 21, 2008 1:08:58 GMT -5
this is a great drop. leaves the reader thinking...
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