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Post by Perfect Mess on May 26, 2007 16:52:12 GMT -5
This was very well written. Short poems are hard to understand sometimes..I like them though..because they're so short they tend to let the mind wander a little bit about what is taking place..it lets the imagination grow i guess..great write :]
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Post by Perfect Mess on Mar 25, 2007 22:28:02 GMT -5
This was beautiful. A lovely write it was. Good job!
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Post by Perfect Mess on Mar 25, 2007 12:41:44 GMT -5
Thanks everybody.
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Post by Perfect Mess on Mar 15, 2007 22:19:05 GMT -5
Innocence of child cry Sweet angel come to protect Tender hands fashioned of love Farewell to meloncholy.
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Post by Perfect Mess on Mar 22, 2007 22:11:58 GMT -5
:)Wow. This was well written. The whole thing is perfect and puts out a strong message. I liked it a lot.
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Post by Perfect Mess on Jul 19, 2007 16:28:05 GMT -5
Aw. A sweet tale of love..love 'til death. I liked it.
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Post by Perfect Mess on Nov 13, 2007 20:40:56 GMT -5
Very nice wording. It was captivating and painted a sharp picture of exactly what you were saying. I, personally, loved it. Good work
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