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Post by Boomaler on Mar 14, 2011 3:02:18 GMT -5
This definitely held your style about it, although composed of a different caliber of language than I assume you would have normally chosen. Really enjoyed this piece~
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Post by Boomaler on Mar 14, 2011 3:00:04 GMT -5
This was so near to being a haiku/senyu, which would have been amazing - not to detract from the magnificence of your current piece. The last line was utter genius - splendid job~
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Hurt
Mar 14, 2011 2:58:56 GMT -5
Post by Boomaler on Mar 14, 2011 2:58:56 GMT -5
Agreed, and it's hard to get such precise structure with the drops. Great job~
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Post by Boomaler on Mar 14, 2011 2:58:08 GMT -5
Nice to see you found and are experimenting with the Drops page - your poem was definitely a compacted volume of meaning. Each line seemed to add another step to the stairs, another page to the tale, another layer to the meaning. Awesome job~
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