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Post by Musie (Breathing deeply) on Mar 28, 2012 16:52:34 GMT -5
This was great! Truly enjoyed....and Welcome to TPS! Musie
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Post by Musie (Breathing deeply) on Mar 22, 2012 22:57:55 GMT -5
WoW! I thought I had responded to this the other day...I guess not..huh? DUH. I found this to be very creative for a drop...Interesting with the (songbird interval) and then the last line "goodbyes sound"...I thought fit the Title well...A very intriguing piece Jah....Enjoyed...Musie
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Autumn
Feb 10, 2012 12:51:55 GMT -5
Post by Musie (Breathing deeply) on Feb 10, 2012 12:51:55 GMT -5
Riverrose....given the word's to work with in drop's...this indeed was a remarkable piece from your pen....Very creative...I SO enjoyed the read my friend.....Musie
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Post by Musie (Breathing deeply) on Feb 4, 2012 9:29:25 GMT -5
This was so creative in the use of the Challenge word's...some great imagery in this piece....truly enjoyed the read...Thank you for sharing....Musie
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Post by Musie (Breathing deeply) on Jan 30, 2012 5:16:42 GMT -5
When reading this I could not help but think it is a Metaphor for some kind of disastrous mistake of a personal nature or of human kind...I may be way off the mark, but this was a very well written piece with great imagery and creativity of thought....truly enjoyed....Musie
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Post by Musie (Breathing deeply) on Jan 30, 2012 5:05:20 GMT -5
I don't know if your still around the board, so albeit quite late, I too Welcome you to TPS! I have to agree with Moi, this is a lovely piece that leaves the reader to ponder....I hope your still around, because you've got great potential as a writer....I truly enjoyed this....Musie
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Post by Musie (Breathing deeply) on Jan 30, 2012 5:01:53 GMT -5
WoW! I liked the who Battle theme of this...very creative write for the poet who struggles. pf which I'm sure many could identify..I know I can....wonderful imagery in this...truly enjoyed...Thanks for sharing....musie
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POWER
Jan 30, 2012 4:58:34 GMT -5
Post by Musie (Breathing deeply) on Jan 30, 2012 4:58:34 GMT -5
Exalt! This was just Awesome! LOVED IT! I hate that it did not get more responses when initially posted....Don't know if your still around the board, but if you are, I would certainly look forward to reading more from you...Musie
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Secrets
Jan 30, 2012 4:56:40 GMT -5
Post by Musie (Breathing deeply) on Jan 30, 2012 4:56:40 GMT -5
Oh my! this was a beauty of a Tear Drop! Wonderful imagery..my favorite line:
"Tears linger silently beneath My naked battle"
Really enjoyed this sweet piece....Musie
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Post by Musie (Breathing deeply) on Jan 6, 2012 0:37:41 GMT -5
Jah~this was simply a great piece of work! Hit's the nail right on the head with today's genre of Movie's and how they market them....Very creative drop! I really enjoyed the read....musie
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Quiet
Jan 6, 2012 0:31:54 GMT -5
Post by Musie (Breathing deeply) on Jan 6, 2012 0:31:54 GMT -5
Chelle~I think you touched on about every issue there has been in the old year..and written oh so well, really a nice drop piece....truly enjoyed....the last line "Why is it replacing songbirds' sounding" was really a brilliant way to end this, sad and just went straight to my heart's soul...that image.....musie
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Post by Musie (Breathing deeply) on Jan 1, 2012 22:50:48 GMT -5
Riverrose~This was SO joyfully creative...what a GREAT piece of work....a lot said in so few word's about the state of so much that's going on in the world today....LOVED IT!!! musie
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Post by Musie (Breathing deeply) on Dec 30, 2011 19:16:04 GMT -5
"Calcified; the twinkling joke." LOVED this image! I love drop's of poetry and this is indeed a gem of a piece....I like what Chelle said about this, how the end really hit's hard and the imagery you use, does that to the reader....this was great! Thanks for sharing...musie
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Post by Musie (Breathing deeply) on Dec 26, 2011 13:29:37 GMT -5
I love anything about bird's and I truly enjoyed the reading of this creative little piece of imagery....Thank you for sharing it.....musie
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Post by Musie (Breathing deeply) on Mar 24, 2011 16:24:08 GMT -5
Interesting piece....Thank you for sharing...musie
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Post by Musie (Breathing deeply) on Mar 24, 2011 16:21:46 GMT -5
Very creative! And true...LOL
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Post by Musie (Breathing deeply) on Mar 13, 2011 16:05:53 GMT -5
Well written piece of drop..and one I could identify with...good imagery....musie
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Post by Musie (Breathing deeply) on Mar 13, 2011 16:03:54 GMT -5
Powerful drop...so much said in few word's and completely understood by the reader...well done I say...musie
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Post by Musie (Breathing deeply) on Mar 1, 2011 11:39:33 GMT -5
Nicely done.I have read the 2nd stanza about 5 times.Beautiful WoW! 5 time's! Well now that IS a compliment...so glad you enjoyed my friend...musie
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Post by Musie (Breathing deeply) on Mar 1, 2011 11:38:39 GMT -5
Positively heartwarming and fresh. Exalt! So glad you enjoyed.,.thank you for the Exalt....musie
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