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Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on Sept 22, 2011 21:52:59 GMT -5
A clever and interesting drop, I liked the sense of adventure to it. Neat write.
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Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on Sept 7, 2011 1:53:30 GMT -5
I loved this so much when I read it. Such fluidity is a rare thing for drops pieces and you've done an excellent job here.
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Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on Aug 23, 2011 21:50:16 GMT -5
Awesome drops, simple but brilliantly effective. Very much enjoyed this.
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Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on Aug 20, 2011 0:05:49 GMT -5
This is gorgeous, I loved the way you started each stanza with one word, very effective. Your drop pieces are always brilliant and a pleasure to read.
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Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on Jul 19, 2011 3:39:26 GMT -5
Wow such a detailed drops piece, from open to close brilliant. Very much enjoyed.
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Leo
Jul 18, 2011 3:54:58 GMT -5
Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on Jul 18, 2011 3:54:58 GMT -5
Bright white teeth, a star lion shining. Past the waters surface he marched Leading silent problems over the world's cool black skin
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Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on Jul 18, 2011 3:54:29 GMT -5
"white is the weather today black is the past"
I love that couplet especially but you've done a fantastic job with incorporating so many words into this piece. Beautifully drops.
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Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on Jul 18, 2011 3:49:39 GMT -5
Gorgeous definitely had that old-worldy feel to it and was so fluid and detailed. Fantastic drops.
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Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on May 11, 2011 6:57:04 GMT -5
Pretty and evocative drops, love the rhythm and the construction was excellent Very much enjoyed.
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Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on May 8, 2011 5:25:38 GMT -5
Wow, your drops are so full and beautiful. Really loving the flow and images you create
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Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on May 8, 2011 5:22:49 GMT -5
I agree, beautiful and deep. Love that final line.
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Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on Apr 18, 2011 7:36:47 GMT -5
The idea of a silent noise is just chilling especialyl in context. Very strong drops.
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Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on Apr 6, 2011 6:15:38 GMT -5
abstract relevance:
mirrors smoke l ekoms
colour [shadow=DimGray,left,300]cloud[/shadow]
fragance of @-> flowers <-@
complements dramatic silence
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Hurt
Mar 7, 2011 22:43:33 GMT -5
Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on Mar 7, 2011 22:43:33 GMT -5
A great drops, awesome flow and beautifully written.
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Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on Mar 7, 2011 22:40:57 GMT -5
hmmm.... this is really interesting, so many ways that it culd be interpreted. Brilliant drops, really enjoyed it.
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Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on Mar 1, 2011 21:42:28 GMT -5
So can relate to this, beautifully phrased, excellent drops piece.
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Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on Mar 1, 2011 19:51:02 GMT -5
A very dense and intense drops, I really enjoyed it. Great work
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Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on Feb 21, 2011 22:02:00 GMT -5
Welcome to the Drops board. It's always nice to see a new face around here. I really liked this, you achieved excellent flow. Well done
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Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on Feb 21, 2011 22:00:30 GMT -5
The use of formatting helped add extra interest to this piece. I like the way it conjured up images.
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Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on Feb 14, 2011 6:34:30 GMT -5
Shadows sigh Piano cries Spectrum crashes Silent
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